Sleeping Valor

lol. Thanks guys. And yeah, I was really trying to get past this so I could get to the next bit (especially since I realized I had strayed from the ...

=P I know you didn't. But I'm procrastinating so I felt like looking it up. ^_^ I will do a great number of things (even clean my room!) in the ...

:D Decided to read this since you mentioned it. It's old though. =P They’ll follow me and then I’m dead, Done and dusted with all things said. I know my ...

Another comment! =P And here I thought this story was buried and forgotten. >.< And just when I'd dropped it, too. >_> As usual just after I had finished plotting ...

This is sad, touching, but sad. (I'm a very sentimental person =P) Also, no great crit for you, sadly. The dialog at the beginning could have used a bit more ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. You've made a great choice, this is an awesome community for getting feedback and feeling right at home. Just make sure you read the rules before ...

Methinks his tear is not of joy, but of laughter. That's a very small chain to be holding such a large dragon. He shouldn't have had much trouble escaping. =P ...

6/10 All it needs is a bit more twist. =P And maybe a little more detail. Why is L's helper ganging up with them against L? Random idea (a dream ...

1) It's already been said, but it's always good to set aside your work and come back to it later. Then it will be less familiar to you and you'll ...

=P That could work.

Bonjour tout le monde! My name's Akilah but you can call me Keek, Kiki or Valor. ^_^ I'll be 17 in February. Though I joined this site in 2006, I ...

Mwaha. I actually got it. ^_^ I agree with Kadie. As soon as I read this it reminded me of a book I read where the guy was deranged--thinking he ...

Woot. Thanks Heather! ^_^ I'm glad to get your review. I'll definitely be reworking the prologue to have more description, I just don't know when. I like setting things aside ...

Mailing is better, you get a nice little official stamp and everything. ^_^ Another question, not sure if this is where to ask though. I've recently run into a few ...

I don't usually do the welcome thing, but I'm thinking I'll start. :D Welcome to YWS! This is a really cool site--the best community I've seen, in fact. ^_^ I ...